Meh
It seems like you're trying to do the whole JohnnyUtah thing, and it isn't working. I know he's got his own thing where he talks in the same monotone voice over and over again, but his voice works for that.
Yours doesn't. It's as boring as can be and just doesn't mesh well with the usually great art you pump out.
I know you don't have to use actors for your stuff, but at least try to mix it up a bit.